The Fall of Equestria

This was my first ever fanfic so go easy on it. :P
Also, this fanfic takes place in the world of PonyCraft. PonyCraft is a MLP themed Minecraft server. So terms in the fanfic such as "mods" (moderators) or "tp" (teleport) are specific to the game minecraft. Anyway...

The world of Equestria has fallen into chaos, Fluttershy- the leader of Equestria after Celestias mysterious disappearence, has been overthrown by the old keepers of peace. Doctor Whoof, a timestallion, is aware of the growing problem but lacks the power to defeat the god-like mods. Unfortunately it's up to him to restore the peace now.
This is Equestrias darkest hour and only Doctor Whoof can save it and regain the harmony that once graced the land. Something else is afoot however, something far worse and in order to stop it the Doctor will not only have to defeat the mods- but sacrifice everything he loves. Will the Doctor save us? Or will this be, The Fall of Equestria.

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4: The End of Eternity (1/3)
Part 5: The End of Eternity (2/3)
Part 6: The End of Eternity (3/3)
Part 7: A New Age
Part 8: The End